Day at the Park Retouched - Chapter 1

My best-selling series Day at the Park has been retouched - fully rewritten with more concise language and improved descriptions.  

Preview the retouched Chapter 1 here: https://www.magnusmagneto.com/day-at-the-park-retouched-chapter-1/

Included in your purchase is the original Day at the Park - feel free to check it out if you prefer the older style of writing, or if you want to see what changed!