Day at the Park Retouched - Chapter 2

My best-selling series Day at the Park has been retouched - fully rewritten with more concise language and improved descriptions.  

Preview it here:  https://www.magnusmagneto.com/day-at-the-park-retouched-chapter-2-first-35-sample/

Included in your purchase is the original Day at the Park - feel free to check it out if you prefer the older style of writing, or if you want to see what changed!